Tuesday, March 15, 2011

"BUSINESS" TRIP - Part V - Hart's Desire


Breathless in the moonlight... Continued...


Under the ceiling of a black sky, billowy gray clouds danced with the illuminated orb and stars peeked through speckling the blackness with tiny golden glows. Time seemed to stand still. Their breath, slightly labored, fell into unison together while the breezes of the night whispered a wordless harmony of yearning around them.  
He looked beautiful in the moonlight. Short, dark, raven like, locks swaying in the light gentle wind as the intensity of his gaze riveted on her thick lashed eyes. He was helplessly mesmerized by her close proximity as he watched her trembled slightly with overwhelming anticipation. Her pulse aroused like thunderclaps reverberating through her veins as he leaned in and she felt the magic between them intensify. He tenderly ran his finger across her bottom lip and twisted his wrist to cup the soft, smooth flesh of her cheek.  Heat engulfed

her body and a surge of fluid excitement flooded her loins. The unyielding voltage between them provoked an immediate and intense reaction of firm
attention rising up on him, eager to be stone stiff.  Hands glided over solid triceps and caressed each side of his neck till fingers met and intertwined with each other just below the hair on the nape of his neck causing it to stand on end. His broad shoulders loosened as his mind ran through thoughts of a long awaited fantasy coming true.  Filling his lungs with much needed air, he pushed a cascade of curls from her face and relaxed lips made their way to glossy desirous ones. The fresh air mingled with hints of musky cologne and the sweet scent of her skin.  Their eyes fluttered shut and erotic intoxication filled them as their lips brushed. He lingered a moment with a light cascading motion followed with a soft sensual pressure that placed his warm lips pressed on hers.  Through barely parted mouths the taste of sweet sparks danced on their tongues, loosened their lips, and pulled on their hearts.  Buried feelings rocketed into hyper speed keeping time with the flux of hormones that conjured wild images of hungry kisses exploring every inch of her flesh.  His mouth salivated, ravenous for a deeper taste, as she opened her mouth with a low sexy moan. The heat with in them heightened to inferno as tongues engaged in the give and take of a sensuous tango. He felt her body liquefy against his, as her fingers tangled in his tousled hair, seemingly to hold on - from being so weak with rising ecstasy. With her meeting the intensity of his kiss, he too, surrendered control and allowed the lightheadedness to wash over him. Passion resounded around them in magnitudes only matched in dreams as chilled droplets fell upon them and stirred them to reality.  
Breathless and drugged with emotion, their embrace almost inconceivably eased, they opened their eyes --- the moon now eclipsed by silvery grey clouds. A drizzling summer mist was falling from the darkness but unable to douse the fire between them. Her hands fell forward and rested on his chest. The heart beating like thunder under her touch.  His intense and inviting gaze pulled at something deep inside her. Eager anticipation and nerves twisted together amidst the excitement. Her body hungered for more as she looked into his dark seductive eyes and seemed to glimpse the soul that longed to mate with hers. She felt her breath catch in her throat - she wanted him so badly. At this moment, more then she had ever wanted anyone in her life.  Chances lost long ago - now all coming back - uncontrollably drawn to each other like powerful magnets.  Damp bangs framed his face and raindrops glistened in her curls from misting moisture incapable of cooling bodies on fire with desperate desire. She blew out a shuddery breath knowing they hung on the edge of what came next.....




TO BE CONTINUED.......


            

10 comments:

  1. AWESOME!!!!! but way too short!!!!! ok....you know what I'm going to say next....

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  2. There seems to be some unfinished business between these two. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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  3. I lost all concentration after the "a surge of fluid excitement flooded her loins" line.

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  4. Jillian, you are by far the best blogger- writer here! Not even close. Congratulations, you are very talented!

    I really enjoy your descriptive writing style in your short story- Business Trip. I'm right there with you as you paint an extraordinary picture using smart, sexy figurative language. But... sometimes I felt some overkill in certain spots.
    I would love to hear more dialogue. In the later chapters, I was waiting for some real hot, juicy talk! I needed it. You get the idea.

    You asked in Chapter 2, "what we want" from Hart's Desire, so there you go.
    Overall - it's a great read and I look forward to more.
    You clearly have talent, and if you haven't already done so... write a book. You're good!

    "Sex makes men happy"....nice job Jillian!
    Sex, even occasionally = happy relationship. Keep them coming.
    Hold the pepperoni...

    CharlieScene111@yahoo.com

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  5. Jillian, you are by far the best blogger- writer here! Not even close. Congratulations, you are very talented!

    I really enjoy your descriptive writing style in your short story- Business Trip. I'm right there with you as you paint an extraordinary picture using smart, sexy figurative language. But... sometimes I felt some overkill in certain spots.
    I would love to hear more dialogue. In the later chapters, I was waiting for some real hot, juicy talk! I needed it. You get the idea.

    You asked in Chapter 2, "what we want" from Hart's Desire, so there you go.
    Overall - it's a great read and I look forward to more.
    You clearly have talent, and if you haven't already done so... write a book. You're good!

    "Sex makes men happy"....nice job Jillian!
    Sex, even occasionally = happy relationship. Keep them coming.
    Hold the pepperoni...

    Duh, winning!

    CharlieScene111@yahoo.com

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  6. Well, "Hey Now!" and thank you, Charlie Scene! ;)
    I'll be posting something in just a few minutes.

    Hart's Desire - with a little Irish in it- later today....
    stay tuned!!! Tell your friends, know any publishers?

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  7. Jillian, how about some erotic dialogue in part 6, that would make my day! Make my year actually, haha. You're cool!
    I, in return, will do my due diligence for you... hot, talented writer needs a publisher... you need to be heard! You're a shining star! Believe it.
    And for St. Pats, I will give my girl the bestest kiss. I already do it each day though....

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  8. Now you're talkin', Charlie, baby! ;)

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  9. am we gonna have to get that hose out???? Looks like ANOTHER admirer of Ms. Hart has surfaced!

    It's very nice to see Mr. Scene appreciating your work..Jill, you wanted comments - you got comments!!!

    Barbara and I are so fortunate to have you in the DRL Family <3

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  10. @ Charlie - so glad someone asnwered her call for comments! You win! Or should I use, "winning"!

    FYI - I heard from Jill a few hours ago... Her day prevented "Part II of Kiss Me I'm Irish" from posting tonight. She's hoping for tomorrow. Hope her day of "life got in the way" was all about fun & celebrating!

    More soon, Jillian... more soon!

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